Its too awesome, I didn't even know what wasn't. I looked everywhere. I like the spider on the road, the picture itself and the fact that it was all put up on a tree. I like the roots too and the fact that instead of the tree being rooted to the ground it is floating.

And the way the whole picture was monochrome, is awesome too but would have made it too monotonous and that's where the other colors come into play.

And the whole idea of putting buildings up on that tree, is a bit crazy but also does add up to the quality of this fine piece of art. I also liked the fact that you also represented people in it too, it would have been incomplete.

So I guess I would be right in saying that this piece right here just does it for me. Good work on this one

I think this is a brilliant piece of work. Excellent use of resources found around the community. The small hints of color here and there make it stand out. The imagery used for this is excellent and was put together very well. Overall technique is to execute this kind of piece is very good.

Some of the things I see that could be improved upon when going on to the next piece is some spots looked very jumbled. The top and portion of the picture has alot of diffrent elements working against each other. I feel this takes away from the wonderful imagery used in this piece. The other area is where the person is the gas mask is. I think making it looks like it is floating and almost looks like it doesn't belong becuase the torso portion desn't blend well with what its surrounded by.

Again overall I loved this piece and these are some of my suggestions that I hope will help you improve yourself in your next piece.